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I want to be the girl in my dreams

Author: deathbroken
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I wanted so much to be like her, the girl in my dreams. She's perfect, flawless, while Im not....

I want to be the girl in my dreams

She has everything I don't
She's got everything I want
She's the best and I'm the worst
She's my enemy,
But I'm her friend.

She knows me well
as much as I know her
She watches me with sad eyes
Knowing what's going through my head

I glare at her with anger
furious that I'm not her
We're so alike we're different
Standing side by side

Two pairs of eyes staring at the sea
I felt plain and simple beside her
beauty, elegance, kindness
everything i wanted to have.

I stared at her
anger, envy, sadness
filled my eyes as i admired her
She's my Idol. my model.

The one I want to be
But she lies only in my dreams.

Submitted on 2007-01-25 06:32:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really liked this, it's the first thing by you I've read, and it comes across as sincere and well written, very nice. I will just make a simple comment on my view. Flawlessness isn't perfect. Think on it, maybe write something on it, idk. I find that flawlessness and repitition are the number one reasons I feel bored with the world.
| Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ]

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