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    dots Submission Name: My Plecebodots
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    Author: Silenced poet
    ASL Info:    21/male/oregon
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 52/41/21
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsMy Plecebodots
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    They say painless is the passing from this life to the next. But in between, pain is all there is. Thats life as i have come to live and realize it, pain upon more pain. In the fleeting hours before the sun rises, there is so much solitude. Pain is a distant thought, and new life is in abundance. I have shaken the hand of destiny, and walked the path of the damned, all thats left is to find the leprachauns stash, and smoke that shit to my dome.




    Submitted on 2007-01-26 06:50:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      fag poetry
    | Posted on 2007-07-02 00:00:00 | by to-wit | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree with the comment below, that line is amazing. keep it up, i quite enjoy reading yours.
    | Posted on 2007-06-14 00:00:00 | by save me | [ Reply to This ]
      some days you wake up and think ''damn i didn't die, now i've got to get up and try again.''

    i think that it's a very insightful piece.

    " I have shaken the hand of destiny, and walked the path of the damned, "

    beautiful.
    | Posted on 2007-01-26 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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