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Eruption


Author: Metalman
ASL Info:    18/M/TX
Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 5 /5 /5
Words: 229
Class/Type: Lyrics /I hate you
Total Views: 722
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 1475



Description:




Eruption



the day comes and i get out of bed
he's lucky he doesn't have bullets in his head
he calls himself my friend
he says he's got my back
but really all he cares about is his sack
one of these days he'll get what's fair
and ill laugh cause i no longer care

ch: you crossed the fine line
you've erupted the fault line
i have to fight to keep my mind
can't stop this eruption end ch:

ill fight to the very end
nobody but me will win
my rage you made begin
what can you do
there's nothing you can do
i will get hold of you
one day you'll get yours
the way it ended is kind of poor
but

ch: you crossed the fine liine
you've erupted the fault line
i have to fight to keep my mind
can't stop this eruption

Bridge: i've lost the mask i hide behind
reality's become unkind
you've unlocked this monster inside
fuck this shit you're gonna fry
you've tried to fuck up my life
now i'm gonna show you what it's like
FUCK YOU!!!!!!!

ch: you've crossed the fine line
you've erupted the fault line
you've fucked with the wrong guy
i have to fight to keep my mind
you can't stop this eruption.




Submitted on 2007-01-26 09:35:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yea, what they said, love the rhyming....
but i wonder, who does this go to??
i love the hatred its so beautiful!!!like the way the clouds can enter the house when theres not even a single cloud inside.....know what i mean? the reefer, bra, the F*CKING REEFER......sorry. i like this....only because of the hatred though
| Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, LOVE YOUR RHYMING
| Posted on 2007-01-27 00:00:00 | by Keller | [ Reply to This ]


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