Description: This has been stuck in my head for a lil while now and I figured I should finally post it and see what everyone thinks so please let me know, thanks.
Tears of the Sun -------------------------------------------
O' hail the sunlight
Glimmering off tears falling
like dew rolling down
nice.
the first couple times thru this i had this picture in my mind of a dew drop dancing on the tip of a dark green summer leaf.
then upon rereading i realized it says "tears falling/like dew..."
so is it actual tears or actual dew,hmmm.
the important thing is is that it puts a crystal clear image in the readers mind whichever way you look at it.
is that the important thing?
now i'm confused.
i like this a lot.
not the confusion, the haiku and the fact that it's making me think...
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Very lovely Haiku! It's a form that proves too much of a challenge for my brain, but that fact allows me to appreciate those who are able to do justice to few words that speak beyond their brevity. You have accomplished just that! Smiles, Sharon
Submission Name: Tears of the Sun
