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    dots Submission Name: Peaceful Slumberdots
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    Author: mandyshay07
    ASL Info:    17/f/kentucky yall!
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 119/121/32
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 370
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 830



    Description:
        kind of an addition to "wintry chill"...a happy ending you could say? sorry to those of you who have already read it, but I posted it at like 130 in the morning, and therefore didn't get many comments, and I'm really looking for some help on this one!


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    dotsPeaceful Slumberdots
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    The streets melt beneath my feet
    as I slide from this reality into the next
    the evening sky reddens
    and the sun brings her soft light

    never a more tranquil sight have I beheld
    the rippling jade waters flow to meet the horizon
    where the water kisses the heavens
    rippling with the current of life

    a willow weeping on its shores
    towers over the whispering grass
    the spirit of the one who made me
    envelops me in his great arms

    Mi Amor
    Mi Amor
    your smile reflects the heaven
    you have created in my heart

    the breeze runs its fingers through my hair
    and your spirit sings my soul a soft lullaby
    as i slowly lay me down to sleep
    finally grasping a moment of sweet serenity




    Submitted on 2004-06-05 09:53:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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