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    dots Submission Name: Crushed againdots
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    Author: rocker5871
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 191/147/90
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsCrushed againdots
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    Pointless and
    Stupid for me to try
    Ignorant and
    Dumb for me to imagine it
    I got crushed again
    But it's not like
    I'm not used to it
    I've been hurt enough,
    But let's go ahead and
    Add some more
    Add more to the pain
    Add more to the heartbreak
    So it'll finally kill me
    And I wont have to wait around for death
    So it'll come peacefully to me
    As pain leaves my body,
    And I close my eyes for the last time,
    You'll look on,
    Not caring anymore than a friend
    Even though I loved you
    And tried to comfort you,
    When life got hard
    And you got pissed,
    I was there,
    But you only saw red
    Angry and searching for
    Revenge





    Submitted on 2007-01-27 10:58:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice poem, we have all gone through these things but like they say, "you need to feel pain before you experience happiness"
    | Posted on 2007-01-31 00:00:00 | by RayneDownAsh | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem starts out good, but you are so involved in the others feelings and reactions you fail to really exress your own disappointsments. If you gave more details of your hurt this poem would be a lot better
    | Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by gjenkins | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a very good piece, sorry that life seems to be handing you the short straw. i wish i could say something that sounds intelligent and stop the hurt but i know all too well what your feeling right now. only everytime i try to tell my guy what i feel somehting happens and he never finds out. sometimes i wonder if who ever is controllng life just likes to play with our broken hearts for there amusement. but you did good here. joanna
    | Posted on 2007-01-27 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your honesty in this piece. I can identify with what you are saying. Very cool
    | Posted on 2007-01-27 00:00:00 | by tirebiter24 | [ Reply to This ]



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