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    dots Submission Name: A Blood Drinker's Cursedots
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    Author: _Phoenix
    ASL Info:    18/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.56 - 46/31/21
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Vampire
    Total Views: 767
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    Description:
       this piece is one basically showing how much it would suck to be a vampire.
    - Phoenix


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    dotsA Blood Drinker's Cursedots
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    Pale as moonlight
    Dark as night
    I am seeking fresh bloodlings
    Before first light.
    Yes.
    I am here.
    I am your worst fear.
    And you do not hear me as I draw near.
    I stalk you from behind
    Touch your neck, move down your spine
    Entranced, you turn to face me...

    Fangs like death swoop upon your neck
    A hand like ice silences your screams
    Your useless struggles turn to gasps
    And another victim breathes their last.

    Blood and tears
    Mixed with flesh and bone
    Intricate senses
    Take years to hone.
    My immortality is my curse
    The murder of others does not reimburse
    For I am incapable of love
    The pain is great
    I regret my choice
    And I feel nothing but hate.




    Submitted on 2007-01-27 12:53:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Merry Meet Phoenix. The poem itself is great. It is darkly descriptive. The problem I find is, it lacks a beat or flow. If you fix that the poem in my humble opinion would be complete. Blessed Be Andie
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by magickandie | [ Reply to This ]


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