Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Thanx To Youdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: luvinanelevator
    ASL Info:    18/f/IN
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 4/19/17
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 704
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 551



    Description:
       This poem is to my friend Starlit Kisses on www.allpoetry.com scam


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThanx To Youdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Give me a rope,
    Find me a tree.
    My life will be over
    In a sec. you'll see.

    Most guys don't like me,
    They say that fat just,
    Ain't their thing,
    Most guys don't even want to hang.

    That is,
    Until I met,
    The sweetest guy,
    On the internet.

    He calls me Hon,
    And when I "hear" that,
    It's like the sun,
    It warms and brifhtens my day.

    Thanx Starlit Kisses,
    You make my day:)




    Submitted on 2007-01-27 14:02:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    133267

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry