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To love and to lose


Author: Katrinagolden
ASL Info:    27/F/chicago
Elite Ratio:    7.22 - 228 /213 /53
Words: 221
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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I don't really care for comments on grammar or any sort like that. My dog died on Wednesday and no matter what anyone may think it is a loss that is still very painful. He was family and I will always miss him.


To love and to lose



To understand love you must understand loss
It wasn’t until you were gone forever that I understood how much I loved you
It’s the simple things that I miss
Your kisses, your warmth, the feel of your presence in a room

Knowing that you are gone and that you’ll never come back breaks my heart
I don’t think that I will ever stop missing you
There is an emptiness inside of me that I don’t know how to fill
Hours go by and it feels like yesterday you were just there right beside me
Near me

When I cried you were there
The house feels empty
And sadness engulfs it
Without realizing it I cry
The tears just flow and I feel nothing
It was like you made everything better without even trying

Wherever I go I will always remember you
And in my heart your memory will reside
You were the little angel sent to guide me and to teach me…
Life is short and tomorrow may not exist

I will never forget you
And no matter where you are I hope you know how much I love you,
How painful it was to lose you.
And how to this day I do not know how to go on without you




Submitted on 2007-01-27 18:16:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  awww thats such a touching poem! i love you too ana! you didn't have to write that for me lol kidding. You're poem was really amazing and touch on the subject of love as what it really is rather than a sexual, teenage lust thing. the only thing i would consider changing is where you said "beside me... near me." i would probably take near me out but it's your poem so if you like it then keep it. I liked it though. seriously.
| Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Midnight_Rose | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow. Oh my god. Just woah . . .
This brought tears to my eyes.
I can relate, I can relate so well . . .
It pains me to think people have to deal with such pain,
Such loss,
Greif.

I lost my best friend over a year ago.
I still have yet to move on
I feel a void inside of me, like part of me is missing.
It's just really hard to cope with.

Your poem was beautiful.
Amazing.
Exuisite. (unsure how to spell that word)

Mickey xx
| Posted on 2007-02-08 00:00:00 | by Drain_my_Blood | [ Reply to This ]


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