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    dots Submission Name: Meant to be?dots
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    Author: heartless_
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 284/251/154
    Words: 365
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 580
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    Description:
       this is about what i'm curantly going through and how i think life is just messing with me, because i can never tell him what i feel.


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    dotsMeant to be?dots
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    My feelings for you havenít died
    They get stronger and stronger every day
    Everyone around me knows it
    Yet your too blind to see it

    Many times I tried to tell you what I felt
    Once I even called you on the phone
    We talked about everything but that
    Then we hung up and I still hadnít told you

    It seemed for awhile that I chickened out
    Every time I got close to telling you
    Then I finally realized you had to know
    I couldnít hide it from you much longer

    Then I had to move, it was only an hour away
    Though, so I thought we could still talk
    But since I left I havenít seen or heard from you

    I wrote you a letter shortly after I left
    And gave you my number and address
    But you never called or wrote

    Every time I was in town, you were working
    So then I decided I would call you
    I had my friend with me for support,
    she would make sure I told you this time
    But your number was disconnected

    Well I knew you two talked all the time
    So she agreed to give you a letter I wrote
    But when her mom did the laundry she
    Forgot to take the note out, so now the
    Letter is lost and forgotten

    I donít know how Iím suppose to tell you
    When it seems the world is against me
    Every time I think I can do it, life steps in
    And something happens so you never know

    Some times I wonder if life is telling me
    We are not meant to be,
    But how can I ever truly know
    If I never get the chance to tell you.

    I just want to know why life seems to
    Play with this broken heart of mine

    Are we truly not meant to be?
    If it's true how will it help me stop loving you?
    Or hurting from the things you say to me,
    So I just sit here and wonder if we are meant To be together or not.




    Submitted on 2007-01-27 18:45:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      interesting...I like it, but Jo...some things take more time than we really deem nessicary. ok? I hope ur not feeling as bad as u say...it would truely be a shame. And how do u know that he doesn't know, or suspect @ least. The boy is smart... u gotta give him credit for that much @ least. lol. Remember science? maybe that's what u should do...write it in a physics equation. lol, well I g2g. peace-
    | Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ]
      Find this guy and tell him. Dont worry about work or anything. If you want him to know- Tell him.
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]


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