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Old. And Kind of Cliche.

Author: icaughtfire591
ASL Info:    16/f/MI
Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 75 /74 /39
Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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yeah, shut up. its old, and kind of cliché. hence the title. so what the hell else were you expecting? dont read it if you dont want it.

but if you're at all interested...

its what i felt, and an understatement of what i feel. so rip it apart if you want...but its mine, and i love it.

Old. And Kind of Cliche.

the beautiful illusionist
to my mind's eye,
your touch draws a hazy curtain
of past and future
over us,

your embrace shuts out
everything else
but me
and this moment.

when all i feel is you,
our hearts beating,
and all i hear is this,
the rhythm of our breathing,
your gaze locks me in
with an intensity
and emotion
that breaks me
down inside.

so strong it hurts,
but so beautiful
that i could never forget,
never again live without it.

im alive for this,
i would die for this.

and you, love...
i cant live without you.

Submitted on 2007-01-27 20:43:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is really good. You captured the emotions of being in love verry well. One of the better pieces i have seen on here lately. Great job. I really like the first stanza a lot.
| Posted on 2007-01-27 00:00:00 | by robertbwell | [ Reply to This ]

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