awwww oh dear. Romeo and Juliet. There is just something timeless about that. Although I think this poem could use some revision... I like that it didn't ramble on but was quite to the point. In response to 'nevender' 's comment.... yeah, the title is at first cliché... but sometimes things that are cliché are there because they are supposed to be... and it serves its purpose well. Anyways, I think it just ties it into the fact that Romeo and Juliet is just this timeless thing; love doesn't change. I enjoyed!
wow...this is nice- when i saw the title, i thought it was more cliché but wow, this is good, i like how you in this relationship try to picture a romeo and juliet scenario yet it seems things aint moving...am in a hurry but i will come back and comment more. keep up the good work.