Description: Note: coethaineactasy: cocaine, meth, acid, and ecstasy.
This is for someone very dear to my amost non-exsistent heart!!!
Like A Drug -------------------------------------------
Your like an addictive drug that amuses my addictive personality
Injecting your affects with just a kiss as i slip slowly from reality
A slow erotic dance of ecstasy moving through my vains
Falling in acid dreams where all my sexual fantasies remained
Your a captivating narcotic inticing my addiction furthermore
In a world where i've never felt this alive and well before
an everlasting fall into undescibable sensation
used later as an antidote for induced masterbation
Just like a drug, your intoxicating my perception
with ferce passion sheilding the face of misconception
I'm addicted, craving the emotions you provoke
as our world diserpears behind each puff of smoke
Your just like a drug and i'm begging for one more kiss of intoxication
or an accidental slip of stimulation
your an overdose of coethaineactasy that amuses my personality
Injecting your affects with just a touch as i slip slowly from reality!
I must admit this is impressive , Love is an adiction , you get adicted to it as fast as you can count to ten , I don't blame you for anything , this is good.
Bravo, i loved it, such a passionate need for the person, such a want and desire, reminds me of me and my sweet heart, she's my everything, example; my kryptonite, or my heroin... i really think you should make another, or a sequal, but longer and more descriptive. example; the feelings of how badly you want the person you know, but i loved it either way, you did lovely, keep up the good work
i know how the crash feels and it is hell
i love this poem not just kuz i can relate but also bks it is wonderfuly writen i think it is the perfect way to describe a broken heart
i think im going to add this to favorites
i know how the crash feels and it is hell
i love this poem not just kuz i can relate but also bks it is wonderfuly writen i think it is the perfect way to describe a broken heart
i think im going to add this to favorites
i liked this one, well written and thought out, the word play is also good,love is like drugs when you have it your on a high when you lose it the comedown can be hell. nice write
gerry
Submission Name: Like A Drug
