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    dots Submission Name: Like A Drugdots
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    Author: gothicgirl
    ASL Info:    23/f/recreant world
    Elite Ratio:    3.49 - 127/111/48
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 1396
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    Bytes: 1128



    Description:
       Note: coethaineactasy: cocaine, meth, acid, and ecstasy.
    This is for someone very dear to my amost non-exsistent heart!!!


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    dotsLike A Drugdots
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    Your like an addictive drug that amuses my addictive personality
    Injecting your affects with just a kiss as i slip slowly from reality
    A slow erotic dance of ecstasy moving through my vains
    Falling in acid dreams where all my sexual fantasies remained

    Your a captivating narcotic inticing my addiction furthermore
    In a world where i've never felt this alive and well before
    an everlasting fall into undescibable sensation
    used later as an antidote for induced masterbation

    Just like a drug, your intoxicating my perception
    with ferce passion sheilding the face of misconception
    I'm addicted, craving the emotions you provoke
    as our world diserpears behind each puff of smoke

    Your just like a drug and i'm begging for one more kiss of intoxication
    or an accidental slip of stimulation
    your an overdose of coethaineactasy that amuses my personality
    Injecting your affects with just a touch as i slip slowly from reality!


    OMG i totally miss the fuck out of you!!!!




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      I love this,its very passionate,and I can feel how much u need this person,how badly addicted to him.

    awsome~safire
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]
      I must admit this is impressive , Love is an adiction , you get adicted to it as fast as you can count to ten , I don't blame you for anything , this is good.
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by Squall Leon Hea | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo, i loved it, such a passionate need for the person, such a want and desire, reminds me of me and my sweet heart, she's my everything, example; my kryptonite, or my heroin... i really think you should make another, or a sequal, but longer and more descriptive. example; the feelings of how badly you want the person you know, but i loved it either way, you did lovely, keep up the good work

    Zack
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by Blood†Tears | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. That's brilliant.
    I'm sorry I can't make this comment better. My mind is blank. I'm speechless.

    Beautifully done
    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      i know how the crash feels and it is hell
    i love this poem not just kuz i can relate but also bks it is wonderfuly writen i think it is the perfect way to describe a broken heart
    i think im going to add this to favorites
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by Dark Romeo89 | [ Reply to This ]
      i know how the crash feels and it is hell
    i love this poem not just kuz i can relate but also bks it is wonderfuly writen i think it is the perfect way to describe a broken heart
    i think im going to add this to favorites
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by Dark Romeo89 | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked this one, well written and thought out, the word play is also good,love is like drugs when you have it your on a high when you lose it the comedown can be hell. nice write
    gerry
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]


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