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    dots Submission Name: Do i?dots
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    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDo i?dots
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    How can I tell you that I donít love you?
    I donít have the same feelings you do for me
    How do I share that with someone that cares so much for me?
    Will practically move the world for me if he had the chance,
    Challenge any issue, and defeats every battle in my life.

    Do I want him?
    Or am I just abusing what I always wanted to hear?
    Can I pretend that hes someone else,
    Someone that I still care for,
    But doesnít even seem to care?
    How come women always go for the screw ups?
    And never the ones that care so deeply for you
    Even though you would rather have your heart broken millions of times
    Before you realize that he was there all along?




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      this is a nice way to get thoughts out, just asking questions. This piece is not really something you catagorize, but it all fits together pretty well. It sounds like you are being very specific, but opening to a broad subject and i like the effect. Many girls can relate to this. Guys are tough, it feels like there is always some problem that i have with guys... anyways, i liked reading something that i can relate to. Good luck figuring everything out

    :) tennisfuzz
    | Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by tennisfuzz | [ Reply to This ]


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