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    dots Submission Name: Midnight Walksdots
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    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMidnight Walksdots
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    The midnight walks
    And the summer talks
    Sleeping outside in the midair cold
    Making sure you had someone to hold
    The fights that seem to go on for a minute
    Never having any limits
    Being crossed on what you hated
    Even on those who you’ve dated
    Having a distant roar of a voice there
    Always having you to care
    Showing the signs of not being lost
    To showing someone how much a friendship costs
    Never wanting a loss to occur
    Not wanting a battle to stir
    What was once so calm and clear
    Not wanting anger and fear
    The distance to you from land and ocean
    Keeps me from being all alone
    But I try the hardest of all
    To keep myself on the ball
    All of these secrets intertwined within
    Is our deepest trust
    The value behind a whisper
    Is a best friend ill always care for




    Submitted on 2007-01-27 22:43:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very good and cute. I think I say this alot, but this would be greaton a card given to somone. It would garuntee an, "awe".
    | Posted on 2007-01-27 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ]


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