Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Midnight Walksdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Kimmy
    ASL Info:    18/f/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 18/32/20
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 544
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 929



    Description:
       To my best friends


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMidnight Walksdots
    -------------------------------------------


    The midnight walks
    And the summer talks
    Sleeping outside in the midair cold
    Making sure you had someone to hold
    The fights that seem to go on for a minute
    Never having any limits
    Being crossed on what you hated
    Even on those who you’ve dated
    Having a distant roar of a voice there
    Always having you to care
    Showing the signs of not being lost
    To showing someone how much a friendship costs
    Never wanting a loss to occur
    Not wanting a battle to stir
    What was once so calm and clear
    Not wanting anger and fear
    The distance to you from land and ocean
    Keeps me from being all alone
    But I try the hardest of all
    To keep myself on the ball
    All of these secrets intertwined within
    Is our deepest trust
    The value behind a whisper
    Is a best friend ill always care for




    Submitted on 2007-01-27 22:43:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Very good and cute. I think I say this alot, but this would be greaton a card given to somone. It would garuntee an, "awe".
    | Posted on 2007-01-27 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    133301

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    prison written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Shi written by ShyOne
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    Carry written by saartha
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Records I written by Raphael
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Angel Eyes written by poetotoe
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Love written by saartha
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry