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    dots Submission Name: Untileddots
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    Author: bleeding_sin
    ASL Info:    16/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 54/68/57
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsUntileddots
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    Big silver box
    Lay on the dresser
    Right across from me
    Tempted to open it
    Take out my excape
    And be fine for awhile
    The pain in my heart
    Is so real
    It takes over my daily life
    How can I excape it
    I have no idea
    What went wrong?
    I don't know
    I now must go bleed




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