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    dots Submission Name: Treedots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 818
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 580



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    dotsTreedots
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    Your lean, brown body
    Leans crooked in the wind
    With your akward arms
    Outstreched towards the sky.

    Your leaves are gone
    But the grass still lies around you
    Lonesome times in the front yard
    Are all you'll ever know

    Starving for sunlight
    Amidst the times of darkness
    And willing for rain
    Among the summer heat

    You appear to be young
    But demeanor seems matured
    I long to help your frail soul
    Though it looks to cold beyond the glass.




    Submitted on 2007-01-28 17:51:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i thought is was great apart from the last verse which i'm afraid lost me , could you explain the last two lines and that might help.
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by lainie75 | [ Reply to This ]


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