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Sometimes I Wonder


Author: Raven_s Miser
ASL Info:    16-female- wap
Elite Ratio:    4.64 - 68 /54 /18
Words: 184
Class/Type: Rant /Depressed
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this is more of a rant a piece of very little meaning of depth, i had a rough day and i felt liek posting something tht eevrybody who has ever felt lonely to the point of ruining their life by marring it by death,thats what this one is about....comment if you want but i dont think much of it


Sometimes I Wonder



Sometimes I wonder why this world can be so cruel.
Sometmes I wonder how ive lost myself,how i've fallen so far.
Sometimes I wonder what this world could be if love was not bound to people who do not believe in forgiveness,and a short bliss found only in an endless eternity.

Sometimes i dont know alot. Thats it I feel like i have a purpose that i was put in this position for a reason,that despite it all i turned out ok, and if im the only person who accepts that then im ok,i live for myself and i live for the people who love me or say that they do,and i wont be a coward set to die bc things got to hard,life is worth fighting for even if you have to fight life itself.

Sometimes I know why this world is so cruel.
Sometime I know i havent fallen unless ive tripped and fell.
Sometimes I know that loved isnt hidden but just beneath the surface waiting to be found.

Sometimes you dont have to wonder...you already know.




Submitted on 2007-01-28 18:39:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Something many of us go through at points in our lives. I think we can all relate. Watch for grammar mistakes, but since this is a "rant" or prose, it doesn't matter much.

Kudos for typing this out.
| Posted on 2007-01-30 00:00:00 | by GetFighted | [ Reply to This ]


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