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    dots Submission Name: Anything is Better then Thisdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 731
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       I hate love </3


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    dotsAnything is Better then Thisdots
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    I donít care.
    He was never there.
    He watched me fall.
    Lose it all.
    He didnít see.
    He never loved me.
    Iím tired of loveís pain.
    It pours on me like acid rain.
    Burning me.
    Ruining me.
    Something I donít want to be.
    Tears cried.
    Something inside has died.
    Bloody arms.
    Sending off silent alarms.
    Tired of being this way.
    Why wonít anyone stay?
    Left alone and used.
    I let myself be abused.
    I canít survive on my own.
    Anything is better then being alone.




    Submitted on 2007-01-28 19:34:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is really sad but good at the same time.
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]


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