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    dots Submission Name: Your Pleedots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 142/116/83
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 143
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    dotsYour Pleedots
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    You keep talking bullets,
    you should use one on your self.
    I just dont see a point in talking you anymore,
    God it's over,
    It's been dead for 2 years
    And it offically ended the day you cheated.

    Can't you start to realize.
    You broke my heart,
    And fucked with my trust,
    And said you cared
    Then why am i stuck in your rut.
    Trying to find out why im nuts.

    It's plain and simple,
    That if u cared you wouldnt have dared,
    The fact is you did,
    So why should i hear your plee.




    Submitted on 2007-01-29 05:18:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You did a very good job with this
    The emotion you included in your words one can feel very easily
    It is very hard to get over a relationship that we were so sure was true Love
    This is why I say Family is the only True Love one will ever have
    Yes there will be Love as in a relationship but no where near as true the Love of Family is
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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