Miss Oh-Oh-So Inconspicous -------------------------------------------
With every little scar you inflict upon your skin
I’m surprised you still have blood to bleed
With every little lie you tell
I’m surprised you still have breath to scream
With every evil, darkened look your mirror suffers to receive
I’m surprised you still see the darkness left inside of me
Miss oh-oh-so inconspicuous
You’re seen as clear as day
Miss oh-oh-so inconspicuous
Now it’s time to pay
For every soul you ever hurt
And every tear that you ever shed
I’ll stab a blade into your heart
Until I'm sure you're dead
You convince your self you’re innocent
But can’t you taste the lie?
Your soul is poisoned by the hate
I suffer till this day
But now that hate is turned around
It’s tainting your sweet skin
I’ll grab a knife and tie you down
Let the pain begin
Miss oh-oh-so inconspicuous
You’re seen as clear as day
Miss oh-oh-so inconspicuous
Now it’s time to pay
For every soul you ever hurt
And ever tear that you ever shed
I’ll stab a needle in your heart
Until I'm sure you're dead
In a selfish suit of steel and lies
You're immune to others pain
You chew them up and spit them out
Then do it all again
In your death their will be blood
As vengeance
For every soul you ever hurt
And every tear that you ever shed
I’ll stab a blade into your heart
Until I'm sure you're dead
Can definately feel the hate in this write. The only thing grammatically is in the lines, "For every soul you ever hurt and ever tear that you shed" it should be every tear or all the tears, but other than that I dig this write. I know people who are fake and it sucks, but that's them and as long as you don't become like them you're all good. Anyhoo, good job.
Submission Name: Miss Oh-Oh-So Inconspicous
