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    Author: williamwallace7
    ASL Info:    18/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    1.1 - 8/5/9
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    why are we here? what is it that haunts us in
    the night. why do we spend our lives searching for
    purpose and when we find it we finally realize that life is
    over its to late, what is it fear. is it that we don't want
    to be useless? That the idea of just being here and
    having no purpose is just to depressing? And why do
    we fear death? why do we favor the light over
    darkness, and when one wants to be different and
    misterious, we hide in the darkness. Why do we call out
    into it. myabe its just that our purpose is to live to die
    to live no more. is that so hard to except, or is it the
    fear that if we're wrong and we do have a purpose we
    waisted in the wind like the flower tosses its pedals?
    Fear, it moves us, it hinders us, it controlls us




    Submitted on 2007-01-29 16:20:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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