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    Author: williamwallace7
    ASL Info:    18/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    1.1 - 8/5/9
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    oh sun oh sun where have you gone tonight
    why leave me with this horrible fright
    i try and stand against the powerful night
    oh sun oh sun where have you gone tonight

    oh why oh why do you take your glow
    and leave me here to stand alone
    to fight with out your brightful show
    oh why oh why do you take your glow

    oh here oh here you come again
    what is it my call that brought you in
    or what it the night and its shameful sin
    oh here oh here you come again




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