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    dots Submission Name: Veindots
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    Author: StevenJay
    ASL Info:    21, Male, Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 27/36/14
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsVeindots
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    Pumping, red, blue, cold,
    Through caverns, fingers, toes,
    Allowing the breath to come in, out,
    Allow for the eyes to experience the sun
    glowing graciously throughout the willows weeping,
    See the moon, the stars, the clouds
    Tiny, invisible, miniscule, yet crucial for the continuation of breath
    Continuation of life,
    To wake in the glow of the orange
    Shattered sky, through the broken glass you wake,
    Finger tips tingling through the sleeping hand
    To live another day in VEIN.




    Submitted on 2007-01-29 21:06:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is one very interesting write
    I cant figure out why you are living in vein though when you know with all those beautiful sights around you that there is a God that created them
    Excellent work
    I look forward to reading more from you in the future
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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