Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: How Dare Youdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: DrkVelvet
    ASL Info:    21/ Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 1/5/17
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 1120
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 540



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHow Dare Youdots
    -------------------------------------------


    How dare you say you love me
    When all I do is cry
    How dare you say you want me
    Then wave at me goodbye
    How dare you hold me close
    And make me believe you care
    How dare you sream and cuss
    And throw me everywhere
    How dare you get me pregnant
    And make me do it by myself
    How dare you say you try
    Then put me on the shelf
    How dare you, How dare you
    Is all that I can say
    When you tell me you will change
    Just so I will stay





    Submitted on 2007-01-29 23:20:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      this is a very emotional piece. i liked it alot, because it reminded me of things i've seen. there are a lot of things you're saying, and i hope that things can only get better for you from here. thanks for the write.
    ~peace and inspiration~
    | Posted on 2007-01-30 00:00:00 | by lebeauvide | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    untitled written by Chelebel
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Push written by JanePlane
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    The Promise written by annie0888
    To written by SavedDragon
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Bond written by saartha
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Linger written by saartha

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to 5 comments if they have given 2 or less.