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    dots Submission Name: How Dare Youdots

    Author: DrkVelvet
    ASL Info:    21/ Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 1/5/17
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 1088
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 540


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    dotsHow Dare Youdots

    How dare you say you love me
    When all I do is cry
    How dare you say you want me
    Then wave at me goodbye
    How dare you hold me close
    And make me believe you care
    How dare you sream and cuss
    And throw me everywhere
    How dare you get me pregnant
    And make me do it by myself
    How dare you say you try
    Then put me on the shelf
    How dare you, How dare you
    Is all that I can say
    When you tell me you will change
    Just so I will stay

    Submitted on 2007-01-29 23:20:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a very emotional piece. i liked it alot, because it reminded me of things i've seen. there are a lot of things you're saying, and i hope that things can only get better for you from here. thanks for the write.
    ~peace and inspiration~
    | Posted on 2007-01-30 00:00:00 | by lebeauvide | [ Reply to This ]

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