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    dots Submission Name: living foreverdots

    Author: williamwallace7
    ASL Info:    18/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    1.1 - 8/5/9
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsliving foreverdots

    life is the thing we love the most
    to live to escape death would be a bost
    and to live forever is our plan
    but i think that is just another scam
    for if we lived forever and more
    life would be just one big bore
    for its the limited time that gives things awe
    but living forever just makes them raw
    so next time you see the sky so clearly blue
    stop and capture and just look for a few
    because you wont live forever even if you try
    because its inevitable for all of us to die

    Submitted on 2007-01-30 11:19:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      True True, and once again very true. If we lived forever, everything we do now, would mean nothing. But because of this feeling of "life is too short" we want to live it to the fullest and do exciting things, and makes it fun! We have to stop and appreciate what we might never ever see again. I love this. ^_^
    Noone lives forever...or perhaps we do in other forms.
    | Posted on 2007-01-30 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]

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