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    dots Submission Name: dio della pietradots
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    Author: leper messiah
    ASL Info:    21~f~New England
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 197/249/38
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 367
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    Description:
       title is Italian for 'god of stone'. i wrote this again for someone i care deeply about, who also happens to work out almost constantly, which although it irritates the hell outta me has lent him a fantastic and *hot* ripped body. reading "The Agony and the Ecstasy" as well, which is about a 2,000 page biography of Michelangelo, so i notice a lot about marble carvings and such now...its kinda odd. No feedback, please...Oh fine, go 'head. Enjoi! Kisses, me


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    dotsdio della pietradots
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    ~Your eyes resembled sleep warm and
    Liquid that spills over the earth like sunlight
    Eyes that can only create those far-off
    Visions, the ones that peer into mist over the sea
    and challenge; fierce with the cold torch of your past, What a future may be...
    Marble has no scars, no flaw
    Except that its been cured and tested
    Your mothers in the sun burned in you every crack
    Every pore in your hard skin bleeds
    nothing but fury towards perfection...
    The stature of a mortal god, you let
    your presence be born again while
    the race of of unsated heathens circles around
    you as if in the hunt for Trojan brides, long after
    the cities have all been plundered
    Wonder if its just your eyes, green like a
    still lagoon, that reflect their beauty upon
    Whatever it is you behold~ Do you create the
    beauty you see in me; forgive for if you happen
    to glance over and catch me watching?
    But the same sun that purifies marble
    lingers in your hair, like it does before shadows
    of evening cast it away in silver boxes
    Stars spark a thousand shimmering whispers
    along broad shoulders and chiseled torso;
    They say it makes the artist weep each night
    to call you in affection by your name...And all true
    stone carved of something sacred bears
    A turbid warmth, almost like the Mediterranean
    was underneath your skin
    You must be a paradise of those misty evenings' children...~




    Submitted on 2004-06-05 15:34:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wonder if it's just your eyes, green like a
    still lagoon, that reflect their beauty upon
    Whatever it is you behold...

    just beautiful! again, like the other one i read, this poem has many great lines that just reached out to me

    They say it makes the artist weep each night
    to call you in affection by your name...

    wow! i have to read this one again and again so that i can try to savor each line. bella bella! fave! and watch out, 'cause i may have to stalk you!
    | Posted on 2004-06-06 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]



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