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    dots Submission Name: Where am I? HELL?!dots
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    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 117
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 415



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       Don't ask, I really cant tell you... personal shit... this is probably one of the worst thing I have put up here... but... its something to read I guess... Bash it, trash it, love it, hate it. I dont care just say something bout it!


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    dotsWhere am I? HELL?!dots
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    Here I sit again.
    Bleeding on my bed.
    Tears dripping down flesh.
    Another bloody sheet in the laundry.
    Whats one mor scar upon my skin?
    This might be to deep!
    Closeing my eyes I weep in desire.
    Tragicly, my life ends.
    Hello Satan.
    You ruined my life.
    I'm yours to fuck with once again.
    It's nice to meet you.
    Now fuck off!




    Submitted on 2007-01-30 12:39:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      umm... could've been longer, but there is a point in all of this... you just have to sit back and realize what the point is...
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by babygirl09 | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting. sucide taken with such stride. a bit short. ummm... i's rethink the last line. it seems a bit trite. but onver all i like the piece
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]



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