this is an interesting piece, but i am not sure i understand its meaning or significance....it seems to have a feeling of saddness about it, an air desperation and unrequited love, although i cant be sure.....
your piece does have a nice flow and pattern to it despite its opaqueness......you have done a wonderfull job with this piece, keep it up.
ps, i would really appreciate it if you could perhaps describe this to me so that i could better undertstand and enjoy the piece? that would be lovely, thank you bunches!!!