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    dots Submission Name: Take A Walk...dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 519
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       Shrug its not ment toward anyone was takin a shower kinda popped into my head


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    dotsTake A Walk...dots
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    Take a look my friend
    Take a walk in these shoes
    You seem to ridicule oh ss well

    Let's see how well you hold up

    Do you see the pain?
    Can you hear the tears?


    Splash upon these sheets of paper?
    See the pain you have caused me

    It is nothing compared to the pain I have endured
         Nevertheless it is pain
    And you have inflicted it upon me

    Little do you know?
    I am strong enough to over come it all!

    And although you do not live within these shoes you ridicule
    Day in
    And Day out


    Although you do not endure the pain you have put upon me
    And the pain other have given me

    Yours will come
    The time will come
    For you to live in such pain I have
    To live in such shoes
    I am living in

    And the day will come
    That I'll be given a chance
    To live in yours
    And be able to be
    Just as content as you seem to be.




    Submitted on 2007-01-31 03:41:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey, I like how you emphasize some words it gives it more character, I think I'll implement that into my writings as well. Overall very well crafted, I enjoyed reading it.
    | Posted on 2007-07-12 00:00:00 | by 7makaveli | [ Reply to This ]


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