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    dots Submission Name: Fallingdots
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    Author: jennah
    ASL Info:    19/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 101/73/22
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 710
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    Bytes: 252



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       not finished quick write not working come back later


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    dotsFallingdots
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    Falling stars and falling dreams,
    life isn't always what it seems.
    It twists around and then it bends,
    you lose your mind and lose your friends.
    What you want you find you hate
    and then begin to hesitate.




    Submitted on 2007-01-31 09:32:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know you said this is not finished. I just wanted to state that so far this is a great write and I like how easily many will be able to relate to the open theme.

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    | Posted on 2007-01-31 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      I know you said this is not finished. I just wanted to state that so far this is a great write and I like how easily many will be able to relate to the open theme.

    ~(code red) orange (shirt!)
    | Posted on 2007-01-31 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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