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    dots Submission Name: True Lovedots
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    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1082
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       A very simple Love poem.


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    dotsTrue Lovedots
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    I love to see the
    light on your face
    to see your eyes
    sparkle with peace
    you hold my heart
    deep inside
    I'm wide open
    from you I cannot hide
    you are my gift from
    up above
    my friend and
    my true love
    I once almost lost you
    but I've found my way
    for you were patient
    you did not stray




    Submitted on 2007-01-31 15:21:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is so wonderful. A sweet little piece and I know exactly how it feels. And its nice how it ends hehe.

    Thanks for commenting on my 2 Christmas poems! Glad you liked them.

    Kris
    | Posted on 2008-12-24 00:00:00 | by Raindrops | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like the story of my wife and I,
    well written, I really enjoyed it,

    Thanks,

    Spin
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Spin | [ Reply to This ]
      It was eloquent yet simple, I had to read it over a few times. But I understand that you were trying to portray the raw emotion that true love is and you did a very good job of it. You point out many of the immediate feelings that come with this emotion like openness and appreciation, then mediated with feelings of patience and gratefulness. Excellent work.
    | Posted on 2007-08-03 00:00:00 | by 7makaveli | [ Reply to This ]
      Love that is patient makes all the difference! Lovely poem, Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-08-03 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      i love poetry about true love...not just romance...good write. i liked it a lot. the flow was just right for the piece.

    emily
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]
      nice poem, this one is very well written, keep it up ^_^
    | Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by Midnight Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you for your comments on "True Love". I'm reposting some of my holder poems.
    Love and Peace,
    lynn
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely words from you Lynn. Very elegant, exquisite and straight from the heart.

    Great stuff.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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