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    dots Submission Name: Rain-drop filled windowdots
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    Author: blue_pixie_dust
    ASL Info:    16 female
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 42/36/22
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 241
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 751



    Description:
       Here's another about imagination. I think that's the genre that I'm best at. Maybe???


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    Somewhere far beyond that rain-drop
    Filled window
    Waiting behind the curtain
    of an unkown world

    Should I stay or should I let
    My mind wander around
    In far off places
    Where a patter of my feet makes not a sound

    Soft, dewy grass melts between
    The roots of a
    mysterious, old well
    Of imagination and wonder

    This is where my heart is
    And where it has been for long
    Shall I wait forever in this place
    To see where my imagination takes me next?

    Or shall I wait
    Until some other day
    When then I will daydream even longer
    Somewhere far beyond that rain-drop
    filled window





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      Nice write. It's nice to be able to day dream about paradise, or being away from the place you currently reside sometime. Maybe for some people their dreams will come true, but we can only hope.
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by Draigon | [ Reply to This ]
      Liked it! Poets are dreamers, and this is a poet's poem. It's very well written and a pleasure to read. The metaphors are different, as are the words, but this poem so much reminded me of the thoughts in one of my own poems. Pen on! Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      i love it, nice use of metaphores, a good length and well completed.

    good write! :):)
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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