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    dots Submission Name: Soldado (Soldier)dots
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    Author: TwistedMinded
    ASL Info:    23/m/San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 82/109/32
    Words: 294
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 1168
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1922



    Description:
       These lyrics are in spanish
    for those spanish speakers
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    dotsSoldado (Soldier)dots
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    (Verse One)

    soy el mero soldado
    mexicano asta la madre
    tengo dioses en mi espalda
    y diablos en la pinche sangre
    tengo armas fundidas
    policias y federales
    soy norco traficante
    soy un grande elefante
    terrorista - racista
    me vale madre la ley
    que se vaygan ala verga
    que me llamen el rey
    unidos en la guerra
    contra el govierno
    metidos en la onda
    jugando con infierno
    volo alto como el viento
    lento como el fantasma
    vegilando a mi enemigo
    castigo sera la cama
    de la muerte para esos guyes
    que me
    cortare cavesas
    como un pendejo sin crystal
    soldado soy yo
    soldados mate
    soldado sere
    y como soldado murire
    la vida loca
    tene queser la mia
    y empiensa acantar la virgen maria


    (Verse Two)

    La vida loca
    es mi porkeria
    la droga de mi vida
    es la cocaina
    pistola en la mano
    y enla otra la cervesa
    loco dela cavesa
    a si es mi dependencia
    soy el jefe
    el jefe de los jefes sinores
    mandado por el grande dios de
    dioses de dioses de voces
    a reconstruir este mundo
    a mi sede dever
    a traer la raza todo
    el gran poder
    porque soy el mero soldado
    sangrado malo por los diablos
    esclavo del alma
    mis ojos nolloran porque los angeles matan
    tengo roto el corazon
    desorden y paz es la mission
    tengo el cuete listo
    con el dedo en el pinche pisto
    listo figo
    ahora vas aver loke traigo - chale
    frente a frente yo no caigo - caile
    tu eres angel yo soy el maldito diablo
    sabes loke tengo y ahora
    aprende loke cuento
    cada ves cantan los dioses del infierno campamento




    Submitted on 2007-01-31 22:10:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      huh???
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      im not fluent in spanish, but I can kind of understand what this is about. The only thing i can criticize would be the spelling. otherwise, yeah
    | Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]


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