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    dots Submission Name: Scarsdots
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    Author: jennah
    ASL Info:    19/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 101/73/22
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 240
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 552



    Description:
       Okay...so darker than normal for me and definately not my best. I was just kind of thinking about how no matter how much something hurts, there is always someone with a worse story (that's what I get for reading Voltaire) and this just came out.


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    dotsScarsdots
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    Scars.
    Everybody has them.
    Some lie plainly on the skin,
    but the worst lie deep within.

    Scars.
    Everybody has them.
    Some are badges worn with pride,
    others shameful things to hide.

    Scars.
    Everybody has them,
    and I know its hard to see
    through your pain, the scars on me.

    Scars.
    Everybody has them,
    but the choice belongs to you
    choose to be destroyed or rise again brand new.

    Everybody has them.
    Scars.




    Submitted on 2007-01-31 22:23:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was a very well-presented message in an enjoyable format. The simplistic style does not detract from the deeper meaning, in fact it makes the reality bearable.

    Well done.
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very simple write. But I don't think it needs to be complicated. I liked it very much. Very relatable and interesting.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this, i really like your putting forward of the choice, "or rise again brand new" beautifully write, nice job:):)
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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