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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet: Breezedots
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    Author: zhi wei
    ASL Info:    17, Male, Malaysia.
    Elite Ratio:    6.14 - 171/203/53
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSonnet: Breezedots
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    The troubled mind is filled with weightlessness
    as the breeze wanders into the window,
    winding back hours with the heart’s compass,
    a reminiscent invisible glow.
    Wishful hopes which constantly meander
    since the saunter along the shore in dawn
    with the decoration of a zephyr,
    similar in spurring feelings foregone.
    And although the wind may be whimsical,
    in it, 'tis perfection I can picture
    framed within edges of the ethereal
    and there, remains beauty with no barrier.
    The breeze brings memories of you to me,
    a reverie I hope someday will be.




    Submitted on 2007-01-31 23:35:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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