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Sonnet: Breeze

Author: zhi wei
ASL Info:    17, Male, Malaysia.
Elite Ratio:    6.14 - 171 /203 /53
Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Sonnet: Breeze

The troubled mind is filled with weightlessness
as the breeze wanders into the window,
winding back hours with the heart’s compass,
a reminiscent invisible glow.
Wishful hopes which constantly meander
since the saunter along the shore in dawn
with the decoration of a zephyr,
similar in spurring feelings foregone.
And although the wind may be whimsical,
in it, 'tis perfection I can picture
framed within edges of the ethereal
and there, remains beauty with no barrier.
The breeze brings memories of you to me,
a reverie I hope someday will be.

Submitted on 2007-01-31 23:35:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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