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No matter what...

Author: Black-Death
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Words: 62
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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No matter what...

No matter how hard you try...
No matter how much you hate...
No matter how much you cry... bleed... feel...
No matter how much you scream.. kick... fight.....
No matter how much you hurt me... Bite me... Cut me...
I will always be there....
I will always Kiss you...
I will always Help you...
I Will Always Love You

Submitted on 2007-02-01 10:25:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is nice. please please please add more to it though. nice pic btw. i'm F.I.N.E. too.
| Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]

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