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Author: Black-Death
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Hello



Hello... doctor.. is there something wrong with me...?
Hello mother... is there some love for me...?
Hello father... is there any alcohol left?
Hello knife... Is there any Blood left in my vains...




Submitted on 2007-02-01 10:29:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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