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    dots Submission Name: War Drumsdots

    Author: williamwallace7
    ASL Info:    18/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    1.1 - 8/5/9
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWar Drumsdots

    i hear the drums of the enemy at hand
    i feel its time where i am to become a man
    they march closer thriving off me fear
    here they come the end is near
    hope i should have before the battle i meet
    this is strong it seems a impossible feat
    i hear the drums of the enemy at hand
    it is here and now where i make my stand
    to fight and die a free death
    is better than an enslaved breath
    so i will fight with every ounce of might
    to stand a free man and die oh so right
    i hear the drums of the enemy at hand
    against my might the enemy shall not stand

    Submitted on 2007-02-01 11:59:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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