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    dots Submission Name: Early Bloomdots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       pudding pie...how's that for alliteration

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    dotsEarly Bloomdots

    I held her
    my flower
    blooming in the winter
    because of
    *gasp now and prepare to be shocked*
    global warming
    some debate
    that she has followed me here
    because we drive SUV's
    no matter
    it really is irrelevant
    here she is
    I hold her
    my lover
    blooming in winter
    lovely flower

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      I'll admit that I don't have a clue ... not a one ... but I do like it ... it's neat and nifty! ... bravo ... bravo ...bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
       SUV's, you're killing me! Even if the floes do melt she could float, a lotus perched on water, I thought you melted it together, I was not there and can only imagine the breathtaking waterfalls.

    I think you should drop the line in ** because it doesn't need to be there, in fact, not knowing is so much more fun.

    I held her
    my flower
    blooming in the winter
    because of
    global warming
    some debate
    that she has followed me here
    because we drive SUV's
    no matter
    it really is irrelevant
    here she is
    I hold her
    my lover
    blooming in winter
    lovely flower

    what better season to bloom than anytime? there's more to it than that, but I plan to have my own adventures! thanks for sharing, it's quite inventive!


    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I think about this topic a lot, interesting perspective. Yes, the earth is warming, but I'm not convinced that it is from humans....That's just my opinion. Also, I'm not so sure that global warming is a bad thing, but life would be boring if you didn't have things to worry about. So we think up things all the time to worry about, that are irrelevant most of the time. Oh well.... nice write.
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by Draigon | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW! Simply beautiful! Thought provoking!
    Yes , global warming can be seen from this perspective too... and soon Siberia will be a huge flowerbed ... elsewhere, water will inherit the earth. Lovely , very poetic.

    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      I wrote something a bit like this, In the flower sense. It's called 'Wilted Flower'. Global warming. ): Bad bad thing. And, most people deny that it's happening but, Oh baby it's happening. I am going to see David Suzuki this weekend. <33 Anyway, I love it. The title caught my eye, that's what I look for when I'm about to read. But, on the off chance I'll look at one that doesn't have a great title. Anyway, Good Job! Keep Writing. <33

    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by EbonyBlood | [ Reply to This ]

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