Whimsical, happy, a ray of light among the blue indigo of the sea. I tell you if I'd written something like this someone would have died or what, it's nice how you gave me a new perspective of generic Fantasy writing.
"and when she enters the oceans depths"
I was thinking "oh look black crevasses and whatnot" and instantly you just turn it around into joyous rings of creatures.
Amusing. I am captivated. I shall read more.
wow. pure perfection. this is amongst my favs of yours, it's wonderful.
isn't just so beautiful? i really wish i were dolphin or a mermaid! lol
i swear i was meant for the sea.
anyway, i'm placing this in my favs, i LOVE this!!
the image this puts in my head is stunning...thank you
this is a good poem, it brings vivid pictures of a unableable beauty that can not be among mankind for we can't handle the beauty of it all. you did real good again hear. i like your writings keep them up. joanna