Whimsical, happy, a ray of light among the blue indigo of the sea. I tell you if I'd written something like this someone would have died or what, it's nice how you gave me a new perspective of generic Fantasy writing.
"and when she enters the oceans depths"
I was thinking "oh look black crevasses and whatnot" and instantly you just turn it around into joyous rings of creatures.
Amusing. I am captivated. I shall read more.
Cheers
Azuire
Oh, a wonderful and whimsical poem of the sea and mermaids, and so excellently done! Great rhyme and meter, quite flawless and an extremely fine poem! bravo... bravo ... bravo ... Michael
wow. pure perfection. this is amongst my favs of yours, it's wonderful.
isn't just so beautiful? i really wish i were dolphin or a mermaid! lol
i swear i was meant for the sea.
anyway, i'm placing this in my favs, i LOVE this!!
the image this puts in my head is stunning...thank you
michelle
this is a good poem, it brings vivid pictures of a unableable beauty that can not be among mankind for we can't handle the beauty of it all. you did real good again hear. i like your writings keep them up. joanna