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    dots Submission Name: the cry of the silentdots
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    Author: williamwallace7
    ASL Info:    18/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    1.1 - 8/5/9
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsthe cry of the silentdots
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    listen to the cry of the silent
    they have no voice because we have stripped them of it, they lay in the womb and are silenced before they have the chance to speak. what would they say if we gave them a voice what would you say if some one tried to silence you, we can barely run a country and have decent lives, how can we dictate that of an innocent life, he or her who hath done nothing? just listen to the cry of the silent




    Submitted on 2007-02-01 16:29:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      interesting.
    this is well written, however i would suggest changing the "her" to "she"
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]


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