My Strugle -------------------------------------------
Why do girls say they hate me?
Why don’t they just date me?
No they just classify/rate me.
If only they’d try n mate me.
Then they might see to turn to me.
N starts to see how they’d yearn for me.
But they go and n they burn me
N don’t take time to learn me
Andrew is the real me. Do ya feel me?
Strong as steel is me. God healed me.
DrewDilla is my exposed alias u see me.
That name makes me unload u see me.
Just before I explode you’ll be told u see me.
N I’ll do it Big N Bold n grab a hold u see me.
Not Bad at all Drew
The rhymes in this write flowed easily and what I really liked is how every line of the last stanza ended in U SEE
That shows you are in control of yourself and your emotions and will not let anything stop you from moving forward
I too my Friend am exactly that way myself
For you see I also was healed Thanks Too The Love Of God and delivered a new life with new meaning
The Old Ron was suicidal and a huge drug addict
I Pray you stay strong Drew
The secret is to remain Positive and give Praise to The One Up Above who has healed you from your sadness and delivered a new life with new meaning
I will be Praying for you My Friend
God Bless
Ron
Submission Name: My Strugle
