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    dots Submission Name: Worst Mistake of My Lifedots
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    Author: rocker5871
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 191/147/90
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 223
    Average Vote:    2.0000
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       yet another joseph poem


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    dotsWorst Mistake of My Lifedots
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    In the middle of the night
    I cried out to you
    Hoping you would rediscover me
    And find my hand in the midnight’s light

    But that ship has sailed
    Without me
    No hope of rescue now
    Desolate and alone

    I felt that cold wave
    Roll over me
    Shocked at the words
    That you were supposed to have said

    I threw everything in your face
    And ruined it
    In tears I stormed off
    Back to my desolate island

    A message in a bottle told me
    I was wrong
    I had lost everything
    I’d ever wanted

    Because I listened to the voices
    That lied to me.
    I wish I could take it all back
    And say it never happened

    Maybe I would still be in your open arms
    Or maybe you would come back
    To this lonely prison
    And make it a little brighter for me

    If only I had heard the only voice that matters
    Over the ones that told me
    “It’ll never work
    Give up, weak one.”

    If only I had listened to you
    If only’s won’t save me now
    But if I could do it all again,
    I wouldn’t have ruined my own life




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