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    dots Submission Name: So far, So gooddots
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    Author: kession
    ASL Info:    18~M~ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 115/156/63
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1103
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    dotsSo far, So gooddots
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    I sit back and think of you,
    all the time,
    and for reasons unexplained,
    I can't get you out of my mind.

    Your smile is so stunning,
    it leaves me amazed,
    you're all I've thought about,
    for the past few days.

    I wish I could see you,
    every single day,
    I would hug you and kiss you,
    and listen to every word you had to say.

    I would tell you how special you are,
    and how much I really care,
    and let you know if you ever need me,
    that I will always be there.

    I want to hold you in my arms,
    and run my fingers through your hair,
    tell you how perfect you are,
    and wisper secrets in your ear.

    I'm gonna be with you,
    for as long as you'll allow me to,
    cause so far in my mind,
    it's perfect between me and you.




    Submitted on 2007-02-01 19:04:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. This was amazing. It's good for girls like me to read poems that guys wrote like this. To put it simple the dark & twisted girls because we've had our hearts broken & are bitter.I thought that guys are all the same; selfish little horn toads that dont care if they break a girls heart as long as the get something. This poem made me believe that just maybe not every guy is like that. That there are some sweet ones out there actually looking for a true love & not just a one night stand. Thank you for submitting this. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by Emo Angel | [ Reply to This ]


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