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    dots Submission Name: ...shade without meaning...dots

    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2788/1297/258
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I have no idea why I allow politics to drive me to such rage. It's about time for a third party to rise and conquer.

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    dots...shade without meaning...dots

    let me declare war
    on the divine kingdom
    of lethargic waste
    tethered to a single word

    I haven't heard
    such blasphemy
    since Dylan went electric
    before the naked horde

    catcalls, whistles
    all the harmony
    the righteous
    had forgotten, or had sold

    we are the jaded
    whores lovers
    love to claim
    as pure

    the anti-virgin
    anti-christian parodies
    of potion gathering

    curse politics?
    curse yourselves
    the revolution's

    hush, little children
    before you spit
    on my sad soul
    drag your sorry *sses
    out of bed

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      .I dont know.. Here in OZ we have to vote, so if we stuff up we all know itís a combined effort by majority.
    But the US doesnít insist voting to be compulsory, and when its stuffed up, boy do the fingers get pointed, and some people cop out all together, with "well I didnít vote" lines, yet bit** about the out come.... Wouldnít it be funny if it got to a point that the only vote a president or prime minister got was their own... Yes that would be good, but It will never happen :( . So I guess in that case all votes count.

    So yes get out of bed and vote or run for office in future :)
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]
      I am VERY disgusted with Bush... to the point that I've thought about trying to take the [censored] out (yeah, READ this Big Brother, whatever!)... But why bother? If he actually is so goddamn stupid (and yes, he IS so goddamn stupid, so it should really be WHEN and not IF)... to attack Iran, then I'm sure North Korea is going to send a nice nuke over to wake up the country... or, go all al-Qaeda on our Schlotski's Deli's. Look, the whole world can't be all cookie-cutter and slum-[censored]ed like we're pushing for, either we destroy each other doing it (and ourselves), or someone destroys us before we can totally [censored] spread it to them.

    Last I checked, Sunshine is free... so solar is not sellable, no hope in that. We're animals... the top of the food chain, but the lowest in our connection to reality.
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]

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