Again, this fits my condition as it is. I can find a lot in these lines you wrote with such attention to details and an emotional undertone. I find this contrast dark-light, cold-warm to be the most successful idea to evolve through any poem. Somehow the thematic structure never grows old and it still remains original if written with proper care and imagination. Really, a praise is in order.
I felt like first snow after reading this. You really did make me feel very cold and alone with this piece and that much feeling hasn't happened to me in some time. The imagery is very strong, the rhyme is excellent in helping it along (hey that rhymes!).
I can't pick a favourite stanza or line, I like them all, so this has to be declared a favourite.
I can't wait to read more of your work.