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    dots Submission Name: sleepdots
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    Author: ghostknight
    ASL Info:    21, M
    Elite Ratio:    5.38 - 171/252/62
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 262
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    Bytes: 444



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    dotssleepdots
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    in a jar
    dreaming

    (remain calm)

    die incessantly,
    sleep
    my
    fuhrer

    grind your teeth
    (remain calm

    self infected)

    in due time
    the phoenix
    will free the
    slave

    from the jaws of the sun

    will greet
    the dawn
    with open
    furnaces

    and
    open lips




    Submitted on 2007-02-02 16:51:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awesome opossum. I just wrote this creative piece for something partially titled "Blue Jarred..." We are totally on the same wavelength, dude, how groovy is that?

    "in a jar
    dreaming

    (remain calm)

    die incessantly
    sl
    ee
    p"

    Quite the conundrum. It's like a calm nightmare, or quiet chaos.

    "my
    fuhrer

    grind your te
    eth
    remain calm

    (self infected)"

    You watch anime? Full Metal Alchemist. Reminded me of the fuhrer. Ah ignore me, I used to be quite the anime freak. But quite fitting, since the leader is the one who makes the decisions and then gets the blame when they don't go as planned.

    Oh dear, don't think me weird but it is quite late just got hit by the biggest bout of sleepiness very suddenly. So this is only a half comment, which I will add onto in the future. My half baked comment for you.

    And I am faving this by the way.
    | Posted on 2007-02-19 00:00:00 | by Sipthefallensky | [ Reply to This ]
      the burning question is: the last time you were in the hospital did you think you were Jesus Christ or Hitler? No, don't take me seriously, you need to hang out with us more, don't you think?

    and when I left the images of the day in ashes, then and only then could I begin with a tabula rasa, reborn as if none of it mattered
    could life be a ride like that?
    one where I could rest and trust in the glorious endings?

    I slept like a log and woke up in the fireplace.

    W.C. Fields

    it's good to have you here sleepless knight, and to delve into this
    rendering, what a pleasure!

    Nan
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      You must have some twisted dreams dude lol. I notice your fascination with phoenix symbology, as I remember reading a previous poem of yours with that in it. And you know what? It's a symbol which has always echoed with me--as an archetype of transformation, as cyclic rebirth, as something that will always continue no matter how many times it dies (ie gets run over by careless cars on the road of life).

    "Fuhrer" brings up some weird associations, namely, that of Hitler, the "father", right? I'm guessing you didn't mean it in the first instance, or maybe you did, as a symbol of 'caring' repression.

    These "jaws of the sun" will swallow everyone at some point further on when it explodes, and to me, that's a realization that sh.it truly happens, but what can you do but ride it out until it comes? Resolve, even in the face of calamity.

    Yadda yadda yadda. I was supposed to be at the beach hours ago, dammit lol.

    Those are my thoughts.
    Peace,

    Jase
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]



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