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I Live For You


Author: xcut_up_angelx
ASL Info:    14/f/hicktown
Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 18 /17 /15
Words: 144
Class/Type: Lyrics /
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(: It'sh about you.
<3
(yep. my britny.)


I Live For You



You saved me
From the unthinkable
I didn't see
A reason to stay here
You taught me
Lifes tough but stay strong
Cause you don't know
What you've got 'til its gone

I tried to act strong
And lend a needed ear
I never felt so wrong
Please stay near
Show me it's okay to live
Cause I'm numb and confused
Show me it's okay to live
Cause I'm numb and confused

My thoughts are blank
I can't think anymore
And just when I think it
You're right at my door
Like a living angel
I love you forever
You're here for me now
I need you now more than ever

Show me it's okay to live
'Cause I'm lost and confused
and lost for words, you know
how to make me feel wanted and loved

You saved me.




Submitted on 2007-02-02 16:54:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Awww........all this for me? In my opinion, you helped me more than I helped you. I guess were just our own little support system! Sorta like dominoes in the sense that if one of us falls, we fall together. And also sorta like a bridge in the sense that all the railings need to *stick together* to keep the things from falling! Me and you, we stick together like a *SMoore* : ). I lob you Smammy!
| Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by poetic_tragedy | [ Reply to This ]


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