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    dots Submission Name: I Live For Youdots
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    Author: xcut_up_angelx
    ASL Info:    14/f/hicktown
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 18/17/15
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 999
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 978



    Description:
       (: It'sh about you.
    <3
    (yep. my britny.)


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    dotsI Live For Youdots
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    You saved me
    From the unthinkable
    I didn't see
    A reason to stay here
    You taught me
    Lifes tough but stay strong
    Cause you don't know
    What you've got 'til its gone

    I tried to act strong
    And lend a needed ear
    I never felt so wrong
    Please stay near
    Show me it's okay to live
    Cause I'm numb and confused
    Show me it's okay to live
    Cause I'm numb and confused

    My thoughts are blank
    I can't think anymore
    And just when I think it
    You're right at my door
    Like a living angel
    I love you forever
    You're here for me now
    I need you now more than ever

    Show me it's okay to live
    'Cause I'm lost and confused
    and lost for words, you know
    how to make me feel wanted and loved

    You saved me.




    Submitted on 2007-02-02 16:54:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awww........all this for me? In my opinion, you helped me more than I helped you. I guess were just our own little support system! Sorta like dominoes in the sense that if one of us falls, we fall together. And also sorta like a bridge in the sense that all the railings need to *stick together* to keep the things from falling! Me and you, we stick together like a *SMoore* : ). I lob you Smammy!
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by poetic_tragedy | [ Reply to This ]


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