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    dots Submission Name: realitydots
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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsrealitydots
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    an undeniable dose of sanity
    given in a thousand tears
    reflecting a bit of reality
    revealing my long supressed fears

    a mess of deminished memories
    flooding my open wound
    haunting this day of clarity
    destiny coming to soon

    left alone, watching for the rain
    waiting for it to fall and clense my soul
    but all I see is a permanent stain
    left on my hands to pay the toll




    Submitted on 2007-02-02 21:47:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm diggin' yo rythyme
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ]
      that sounded quite sweet and rhymed nicely.


    an undeniable dose of sanity

    i really like dat line yo.
    | Posted on 2007-02-02 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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